| Fiercedeity1994 Member Level: 13     Posts: 11/25 EXP: 8710 For next: 1557 Since: 01-03-09 Since last post: 13.0 years Last activity: 12.2 years  |
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| hi. I am writing a Book. this is a requesting thread. in other words. I will tell more and more if requested. I will give you the story-line and character names and other info. anyway. I just wanted to see what you guys would think. if you like it, request more about it, and I will tell the story in this thread. I'm not sure what you will think. but I will give it a shot in the Dark. I only request that if you don't like it. reject it nicely lol. -Space Sphere- (story-line) Before the world existed, a deity named Ven, created the Galaxy. Ven created Order, he was the father. when he created the world, he created a man named Ray, Ray was the son. Ven also created a beautiful deity named Seth, who was the deity next to Ven. Seth was a very loved Deity indeed. after many years of a wonderful world filled with many people, Seth decided to declare a powerful battle, with Ray the son. Seth did this to show that he was the better Deity than Ven was because of his power, and so. Seth became a man as Ray was, Seth chose to fight on a bridge, with water flowing underneath it. they pulled out their swords and fought, their swords clashed as hard as a man could hear, and Finally, Ray the son, was just about to Finish Seth who, was on the ground when suddenly, a voice sounded upon both of them: "Stop, this will end now" said Ven who, was making the thunder roar. Ray stopped fighting, Seth however, got up and Killed Ray with his sword, in the very middle of the Bridge, blood dripped on the bridge, making the water turn red. after this, Ven was to banish Seth forever. even under all of this, Seth did not care Ven called out, saying: "Seth, you are to be Banished forever" said Ven the deity. with this, Seth turned himself into a Demon. after Seth did this, he called out to Ven, Seth shouted: "Seth is no more! I am now Sethar! Deity of evil!" shouted Seth aloud. Sethar then, attacked all of the people of the land. and so, Ven the deity, took a chunk of the earth, and launched it out to the galaxy, and provided it with air and water as earth has. Ven called this place "Safety" the people of the land were to flee to the safety planet, in a space ship created by a man one year before this event, Ray's wife named Bethlen also had to flee to the Miracle planet part that Ven created. Bethlen not long ago, gave birth to her fourth child which was a baby boy. Bethlen and her kids took the huge space ship, and launched out with the rest of the 135 people. some people were sadly left behind on Earth. after they launched out, and the space ship arrived at the safety planet, Ven the deity, covered the safety planet, with a godly force-field thus, the 135 people were safe from Sethar. however, the rest of the Earth was in trouble. Ven the Deity, Covered the planet with light for a short time, making Sethar leave. however, when Sethar left, he took Five others with him to become Demons. and Sethar, Decided he would Possess power by Becoming a Giant evil planet. Sethar is in the core of this Planet, known as the Space Sphere. one of the Demons would now live on another planet next to the Space Sphere, feeding it Energy. Sethar left with so much power, that he made a Rotation cycle for the earth. this cycle, would have the earth Drawing slowly closser to the Space sphere, which would then, destroy the earth and the rest of the planets. after Sethar's transformation, Sethar said to Ven: "This will be your end Ven! you are Deity no more" shouted Sethar the Space Sphere. Ven's answer to this was: "he who is son from the man who was murdered, will become the true Deity and Glorify all Evil" with that, Sethar Laughed, and continued his Agonizing plans in outer Space. Bethlen named her Son: Venbray. in honor of Ven the Deity, and Ray Venbray's father. Venbray now grows up as the last born, and will now face his life, as a miracle survivor. Venbray's brother is now missing. Venbray at the time was 10 years old, when his Brother Disappeared. Now Five years later, the safety planet was being attacked. the Space Sphere was so strong after all these years of being fed the Energy, that the Feeding planet was giving to it. Venbray now, attempts to flee with his two oldert sisters and his mother. his Family were inside the fleeing ship with him when suddenly, Venbray's side-window broke. Venbray fell out of his side of the ship, and somehow, the window fixed itself after Venbray fell out. Venbray now, falls down to the Planet Earth. Venbray's Family and everybody else, now thinks he is dead. how did that shot not effect everybody else? it had become clear, that it was Ven's plan, they thought it was simply Venbray's time to die. there is another matter. and this one is the most important: the world has 1 Year to last. because Ven the Deity, created a calendar. this Calendar, would count down to the time when the world would go back in time, and make the Earth peaceful again by turning it back and Reviving the dead ones, into eternal peace. however, if Sethar is alive at this time, the world will turn back as a living Lake of fire, and this will repeat for ever, with no end of the suffering. Sethar's Earth Rotation creation is an agonizing and tormenting plan. if Sethar is not Defeated by the time the earth reaches the space Sphere, the Earth won't just be destroyed in a clash but, going back in time will only make this happen again and again forever, with more pain and suffering each time. Venbray now wakes up in a land called Lanbridge Cape, where he now meets a guiding man named Natas. Venbray then, meets a guy his age (15) named Arber and later, they both meet a gate-keeper named Mila, who Arber likes. Venbray also thinks that the second husband of his mother named Jolt, is evil. Venbray is now told by Natas, that a space ship lurks in a Valley. Venbray must now come to the decision of becoming the Deity, he will now, try to find this ship, and save his mother. can Venbray save the Heavens, is the true question in this 5 part Adventure Thriller. anyway, this is only so much detail. I don't know if you guys would like it. it's a great book, my Family likes it a lot. it deserves attention in my opinion. I think it's a great story, and I hope you guys come to see it the way I do. if requested, I will give you guys Venbray's life story. and if it goes far enough, I will copy and paste the story from my story's Document. thank you. |
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