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Posted on 09-25-15 03:47:24 PM Link | Quote
a quick explanation of what I do, I stereotypically make electronic music in FL Studio, but I am exploring other forms of creation and also other genres

for starters, here's something I recently released, a real nice collaboration, there's a number of released stuff uploaded on my soundcloud account including an officially released song on a label

and now, for some tiny clips and scraps

this is my attempt in making something kinda more based off of only synthesizers with no drums and other elements, I currently like where it's heading but I haven't added more in a second

a kinda 'cyberpunk' inspired song that's going into a future album / EP release I'm close to being done with, I'm incredibly pleased with the outcome

if im gonna be honest, i had no idea what i was getting into with this since this was mostly a randomly jumped into idea, but most people declared it as IDM, so that's fair (I also strongly like this one too lol)

there's more i can share but those are the current projects of now, so I figured that's about enough to share, bwahaha, i will share more though

feedback always strongly appreciated!!

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Posted on 09-29-15 04:21:50 PM (last edited by 2Tie at 09-29-15 04:24:02 PM) Link | Quote
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I guess I'll preface this by saying your music is probably a smidge outside my normal listening type, but will still try to provide what feedback I can :3

Crimewave - Pretty good overall! Flows between the parts very well, though if there's something I can gripe about, it's that, maybe because I'm used to instrumentals or songs with speech interspersed throughout, the single verse of lyrics (and the one line before it) seem kind of out of place I guess? Enjoyed the end :3

synth music atttempt 1 - man this is a pretty melody! The first couple words trigger SEGA chorus associations, heh... Not really any gripes here!

Exit Node - very nice, though I think the snare is a smidge flat up until the last section? speaking of the end, sometimes the appregiated bit is drowned out, wouldn't mind if it were kept a little clearer through the swell-notes (i don't know much jargon when it comes to this genre P: )

Ultimate Fate of the Universe - the beginning transitioning into the song is nice and smooth :3 Though I guess I can classify this one as more of an ambience song? *googles IDM... "well uh, there it is" gif here* Not much I can really pick at, nothing really stands out either, but that's not a bad thing, it all fits with the rest of itself.


certainly enjoyed, though :3 hope I was helpful in some way! your music is definitely well-made, professional-grade sounding stuff (when it's finished at least!)

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Originally posted by 2Tie
I guess I'll preface this by saying your music is probably a smidge outside my normal listening type, but will still try to provide what feedback I can :3

Crimewave - Pretty good overall! Flows between the parts very well, though if there's something I can gripe about, it's that, maybe because I'm used to instrumentals or songs with speech interspersed throughout, the single verse of lyrics (and the one line before it) seem kind of out of place I guess? Enjoyed the end :3

synth music atttempt 1 - man this is a pretty melody! The first couple words trigger SEGA chorus associations, heh... Not really any gripes here!

Exit Node - very nice, though I think the snare is a smidge flat up until the last section? speaking of the end, sometimes the appregiated bit is drowned out, wouldn't mind if it were kept a little clearer through the swell-notes (i don't know much jargon when it comes to this genre P: )

Ultimate Fate of the Universe - the beginning transitioning into the song is nice and smooth :3 Though I guess I can classify this one as more of an ambience song? *googles IDM... "well uh, there it is" gif here* Not much I can really pick at, nothing really stands out either, but that's not a bad thing, it all fits with the rest of itself.


certainly enjoyed, though :3 hope I was helpful in some way! your music is definitely well-made, professional-grade sounding stuff (when it's finished at least!)


Crimewave: Yeah, there's been a few points in production where I've felt that the vocal might have been out of place, but that usually ended up being a 'back and forth' type of thing, I generally felt okay with it overall.

Exit Node: Would you mind explaining what you mean about the snare? I'm a bit confused by that, other than it, everything else makes sense! The little arpeggiated bit really is supposed to be a bit 'drowned out' compared to the swell, but I could always see how it sounds when not drowned out!

Ultimate Fate of the Universe: I guess you can say it's partially real ambient, even with IDM, I'm not sure what to ultimately classify it hahaha

Thank you for the response and feedback!

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