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The Shy Guy
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Posted on 04-03-14 04:57:02 AM (last edited by The Shy Guy at 04-08-14 02:14:29 AM) Link | Quote
Overview:

Ahem, this is a sprite comic about... well... the misadventures of Super Mario and company! Here's my first five strips.

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Episode 1 - The Letter:



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Episode 2 - Bowser:



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Episode 3 - Christmas:



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Episode 4 - Revenge:



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Episode 5 - Invasion:



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Okay, first I'd like to say just how sorry I am to BMF54123 on making it look like he's double posting. It so happened that I accidentally deleted my very first post, so I had to delete the rest of my posts and edit my second post. Please note the fifth episode was in the making after BMF54123's second post.

Next, here's the credits in this following spoiler:

Providing a basic overview on this story, Mario and Luigi are invited to Peach's Castle. Peach is however kidnapped by Bowser, but luckily a bombing occurs and Bowser is blasted out of the sky, with the side effect of our heroes being blasted off too. While Mario lands in Goomba Village and tries to go back to Toad Town which is invaded by Shroobs and Luigi lands on Yoshi's Island soon off to save the Yoshi children while Blooey seeks for revenge, Bowser will land on a spaceship in Episode 6.
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Posted on 04-03-14 05:03:25 AM Link | Quote
Not bad! Your spelling's off in a few places, but otherwise this is pretty well done.

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Posted on 04-05-14 09:24:20 PM Link | Quote
Minor suggestion: bump up the font size a point or two. It's pretty hard to read on high-DPI screens, and it's also causing some characters to blob together ("il" in "village", "ut" in "but"). You might also try disabling font smoothing, if possible, just to see if it helps at all.

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Posted on 04-08-14 02:11:38 AM Link | Quote
Well, here's #6:

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Episode 6 - Not Right:



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Bowser lands in his castle, now converted into a spaceship by Fawful. Unfortunately he gets sent into a trap and is now experiencing some strange things. Coming up Mario enters Shy Guy's Toy Box and experiences the similar things as Bowser. Is this world even real? What in the Mushroom World is going on? The dastardly plot will be revealed in Episode 7...
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