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SamEarl13

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Posted on 02-20-12 10:03:08 PM Link | Quote
I've Noticed that there seems to be alot of sprite comics (some mario, some not) and was thinking of making one myself. Be warned though my stories arent funny. I use many things in the Story and its Very Complicated so i'll explain 1 of the 2 alternate universes:
When trying to save Paula from donkey kong there is a Freak accident where Paula Falls from the construction site and dies.
Angered Mario promises to take revenge and becomes a lumberjack leaving Luigi on his own to Battle Bowser causing him to become a battle hardened Military Expert and Liutenant in MKFG (Mushroom Kingdom Freedom Group). Bowser has Taken over Mushroom Kingdom but has become Lazy because of lack of Good Opponents.
The Kongs Home has been partly destroyed and Cranky Kong is Dead, Funky is now the supplier of the MKFG's weaponry. Conqueror K. rool is still alive because of Crankys Death and Seeks to take Bowsers Throne.

Sound Good?
Feel free to ask me about anything, even characters not mentioned here.
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Posted on 03-13-12 07:03:28 PM (last edited by Pandaren at 03-13-12 04:04 PM) Link | Quote
Do note Edgy Mario(TM) has been done to death and it never quite fits it. Even when mario games do get a few darker tones thrown here and there, the baseline has always been fantasy adventure with a tone of comedy. Not to mention realism in a mario universe...

Not that the idea is bad, but you need to write it well to make it work. What's the plot? Who are the main protagonists and antagonists? What's the conflict of the story?

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SamEarl13

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Posted on 03-14-12 09:40:25 AM Link | Quote
It’s a Series actually and it does not really have realism, it just ties loads of random things from the games and explains them in the craziest ways possible. Ever heard of the Super Smash bros melee glitch which gave the daisy trophy a third eye? My explanation is that the person you see in melee is actually a character called ‘petunia’ in disguise who sold her to the devil (or its Mario equivalent) and in an a attempt to keep her soul she created her double (daisy) and put her soul in her. When she tried to get her soul back it didn’t work and Daisy learnt that she was fake. Because of this Petunia cursed (?) Daisy to have constant memory loss which is the reason she sounds so stupid. This is only one of the many backstories, you can always ask if you want any more complicated back stories but like you said this has to be well written and it would be better to show you the finished work than just the ideas.

The main plot revolves around Petunia trying to open a portal to her own dimension by crashing 3 different dimensions together. She has taken over Luigi with mind control turning him into a much darker verion of Mr.L. Peach isn't that happy at mario either and decided to turn the tables by secretly taking over bowsers castle. Pretty much its mario vs everyone. Petunia was the one that caused Paula to die in the alternate universe, the secret is Paula is Peach's, petunia's and daisy's ancestor and by killing an alternate paula it would stop another petunia from being born meaning there would be no competion. Complicated enough yet.

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