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Posted on 06-27-11 08:57:04 AM (last edited by GlitterBerri at 07-29-11 03:30 AM) Link | Quote
A few translations I've done so far from the game's official artbook. There's a lot of misinformation floating about, including the Colossi having names, Mono and Wander being in love, and Agro being female, from what I can tell. I'm hoping to do what I can to clarify the limited story by providing some official information on the development of the game, the ideas behind the plot, and the characters themselves.

Character Summaries
Concept Art & Design Notes
Unused Colossi Sketches
Unused Colossi in Action
The Ending Made Clear
Dormin's Unused Hints

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Posted on 06-29-11 11:29:52 AM Link | Quote
Added unused Colossi sketches.
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Posted on 07-02-11 05:50:58 AM Link | Quote
Added "Unused Colossi in Action" and "The Ending Made Clear".
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Posted on 07-03-11 01:22:31 AM Link | Quote
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We were considering having the ending change a little bit if the player had save data from Ico, but we gave up on that.

Wander, Mono, and Agro eating watermelon in the roof garden?

Thank you for translating this, it's been very interesting to read.

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Posted on 07-29-11 06:29:48 AM Link | Quote
No problem, here's something else. ^^ Unused Dormin hints that would have made the game much easier to play!
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Posted on 03-30-12 08:34:11 AM Link | Quote
Early version of the ending and unused text with translation comparison.
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Posted on 01-18-14 11:36:54 PM Link | Quote
A Brief Analysis of Some Special/Unused/NPC Items
Hidden Arena Names, Unused Save Shrine, & Odd Translation Differences

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