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Katelynn
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From: The dark and evil depths of western New York

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Posted on 03-29-11 04:36:06 AM Link | Quote
Me and my ex boyfriend have been writing a story for awhile, on and off... We finally have three chapters put together, as well as tons of ideas, plans and general plot flow worked out, so things should progress smoothly from here on out.

As far as I'm aware we have a single reader, which is honestly the most pathetic thing I can think of. So I'm tossing this out here in hopes that it will attract attention. Good, bad, I don't care. Anyways...

Pokémon Azure is a looooong story in the works that follows the adventures of Andrea Dennison, a quirky nineteen year old from the city of Azure Ridge, on her journey of research, conquest and general nonsense across Storm Island.

There will be four major parts to this story, each containing several chapters. The first part is underway obviously. I'll list the parts for... no particular reason really, as well as links to each chapter under them.

Storm Island
- Chapter 1: Just a City Girl
- Chapter 2: An Important Decision
- Chapter 3: Off to Silvermist!

Uncertain Horizons
- Coming Soon! (hahaha yeah right)

The Journey Continues
- Coming Later! (no way)

The Road to Victory
- Coming Even Later! (I hope)

Note: If anyone has any personal qualms with the stuff being hosted on DeviantArt, I'll be happy to post the chapters here on the forum. I won't bother at the moment, since I'm not sure if it'll be a waste of my time to do so at the moment.

If the chapters are far too wordy and long, I'm afraid there isn't much to be done about that. When I originally wrote the first chapter, I was going for the length of what one would see in a modern Pokemon episode if written down in a novel form.

On a similar note, I'd like some criticism in terms of the actual writing style. People have told me we're too descriptive, others have said we're not descriptive enough. I'm unsure of which direction to go.

Chapter four should be up "soon". "Soon" meaning whenever the hell we finish it.

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Lewis: Ok, we need to gain the trust of some villagers.
TotalBiscuit: I think Simon's qualified to do that!
*Simon approaches a villager and summons a swarm of angry bees*
Simon: Hello! Do you like bees!?
*The villager drops dead from the bees*
Simon: Oh dear... Um, that could have gone better...
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