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Posted on 07-15-10 04:34:13 PM

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I had an idea for a story in my head, so I planed it out on paper and was going to write about it. I loaded my computer up and before I did, I checked the fourms and my eye got caught on Peardian's Yoshi vs Shy-Guy comics and it gave me an idea to create a comic of my story.
So here it is, it's about a man who takes over a Yoshi's body against his will. This story starts in the present and goes back into the past to see the unravel. If I choose to continue this, I will carry it on to the first comic strip and shows what happens after the event in the first strip.

Keep in mind I have never done a web comic before.

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Posted on 07-15-10 05:36:41 PM

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Please format it like this instead:



<a href="http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/2204/comic1f.png" target="_blank">

<img src="http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/2204/comic1f.th.png" border="0"/></a>

<a href="http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/3153/comic2a.png" target="_blank">

<img src="http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/3153/comic2a.th.png" border="0"/></a>

As for the comic itself, I don't really have much to say yet.

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Posted on 07-15-10 06:08:50 PM

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Poor attention to grammar and spelling, boring scenario, boring characters, lolsprites...
This is about as mediocre as it gets. Do something interesting, or this'll just be another of "those" sprite comics that everyone stops caring about after you stop updating.

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Posted on 07-16-10 11:54:37 PM

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	I concur, especially on the grammar part. I tend to be a spelling Nazi, and this is just painful for me to read. ____________________

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