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Bagel

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Posted on 02-11-10 11:47:15 PM Link | Quote
I did this ... I already made this song like twice now but hopefully this will be the final version. I guess if you don't like electronica this may not be for you, and the EQ is set up for it to sound best at a high volume.

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Posted on 02-12-10 03:20:40 PM (last edited by Miasmir at 02-12-10 12:23 PM) Link | Quote
I'm pretty biased because this is basically my favorite style of music but I'm enjoying this immensely.

This is pretty much the sort of thing I dream of being able to do myself. Good job.

(I'd do constructive criticism but ... I'm not done coming down from the trance high yet.)

(edit: Well the ending is kind of disappointing, I felt like it was working towards a massive climax but it just faded out. I guess if the drop in emotion was more gradual it would feel less like crushed expectations.)
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Posted on 02-13-10 03:51:54 PM Link | Quote
That's a problem I run into frequently. I hit a wall and have nowhere to go and then get lazy and throw in a fadeout >.<

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Posted on 02-14-10 09:00:13 PM Link | Quote
So I got a chance to put this on my good speakers today, and it really benefits from a subwoofer.

You could just have the cymbal around 5:25 be the last sound in the song and not bother fading out; having heard this with appropriately loud sound equipment, I now believe the part before that totally counts as a climax.

Eh, just a suggestion.
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Posted on 02-14-10 09:14:23 PM (last edited by Bagel at 02-14-10 06:14 PM) Link | Quote
Was planning on doing one more revision before I declared 744 to be officially done. I'm still not happy with it either.

Also finished work on this today.

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Pretty nice; a lot better than I can do, though I can only barely get a song out.

Yeah, it's hard trying to finish a song; there's this first half which is nice, then motivation starts to drain as it goes on. Not to mention being annoyed whether each portion is 'good enough' or not.

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