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Juliet
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Posted on 09-23-09 09:36:51 AM (last edited by Cirvante at 09-27-09 08:35 PM) Link | Quote

"Where am I?"

She looked around and noticed....

"It looks like, I'm in a hospital...

She wandered around the hospital for awhile, expecting to know the exact place where she was.

She saw a boy and called him, by shouting.

" mister!"

But he ignored her. She shouted once again, but the same thing happened.

" If you dont want to then dont..." She whispered.

She continued wandering... but every person she called just ignored her, same as what the boy did to her.

As time went by... little by little, she started to loose hope, until she cant handle her feelings anymore.

"Mum... dad..... I'm lost..... *sob

"Why...", A crying lady inside a room with an opened door said.

She got curious aftering hearing it, so she went there and looked. She watched the lady's face for a while, until she realized that the crying lady was her mum.
"mum!"

She ran towards her...

"Mary.... why did you leave us? " her mum said.

"I'm still here. Beside you. Mum, look here, mum."

Her mother looked at the person lying on the bed beside.

" Mary...."

"Mary?" she said, at the same time, she looked at the girl on the bed. Seeing that the girl's chest was not moving, it means that the girl... wasnt breathing anymore...

"Mary... you're still too young..."

" She looks like me.... or is it really me? ", she thought.

[Cirvy edit: Please fix your layout. It somehow broke the text here. ]
Dan Hibiki
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Talks mostly in pictures.

"I dislike the art of fighting, but I want to be the king of fighters!"
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Posted on 09-27-09 11:20:42 PM (last edited by The Accidental Protege at 09-27-09 08:21 PM) Link | Quote
Outside of unfathomable amounts of punctuation, usage, and organization problems, this is a good time to tell you that your layout is broken, at least on my end.

I'd clarify what I mean on the English mastery, but, most of it should be glaringly obvious. Just type as though you were typing a resume, and exercise the proper grammatical prowess.

EDIT: Wholly shit, its more broken than I thought; it's overlapping this post.

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Juliet
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Posted on 12-25-09 10:13:30 AM (last edited by Juliet at 12-25-09 07:17 AM) Link | Quote
\Sorry about the layout, I'll fix it

And thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it.

EDIT: And sorry if i didnt log in for a while.

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Acmlmboard - commit 47be4dc [2021-08-23]
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