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Fiercedeity1994
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Posted on 02-12-09 05:23:36 AM Link | Quote
hi, believe it or not. I became a christian in September of 2008. and I for one, can say that I know Satan's ways. I was about half good half evil at one time. but hey again, believe it or not. anyway, here's a Poem I wrote, it talks about Satan taking over you.

I glare in envy
I glare in shame
I glare in evil
I put good to blame.

I feel my heart, beating faster
I feel the devil with disaster

I hear my voice
it shouts again
to the holy one
who can take my sin

I feel Satan
he makes me ache
when I think there is no god
it is more than I can take

can Satan win a soul in need?
who was born from the holy seed?

I feel myself trembling
I am seething again
I feel less worthy than the sand.
Satan laughs, he wins again.

it's short but sweet.
Fiercedeity1994
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Posted on 02-14-09 05:32:48 PM Link | Quote
Perhaps you will like this one. this one is about hiding from your feelings. hiding your hurt from the inside out.

-Empty Box-

Lighter than a jar of nothing
heavier than the hurt inside
when I am just an empty box
I feel to have no pride

I feel the empty spaces
I feel the loves that were
I felt the way you were loving me
I wish for this no more

Don't look at me
Don't cry for me
don't hear a word I say
I am just an empty box
and here is where I lay

for those of you who love me
it is a Total waste
for those of you who hate me
don't waste to walk in haste

I don't wish to know who hates
or those who glares and mocks
I am no man worth fighting for
I am just an Empty box

I just stand here alone
I hear the voice of laughter
I hear the thoughts in my head
where is that happily ever after?

must I stand in such a manner?
must I stand out like a banner?

is a voice I hear inside my head
just another torture in my bed?

Don't Grieve for my wounds
don't listen to the one who talks
I am not a man worth fighting for
I am just an Empty box

and when you hear the one who hates
and you need to feel no shouts or mocks
just Remember I am here
your friend the Empty box
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Posted on 03-10-09 07:50:27 PM Link | Quote
I really like the second one.

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Posted on 04-03-09 05:06:16 PM Link | Quote
oh do you? My sister showed this poem to her co-workers and they all liked the Empty Box as well. this was a pretty random poem. I pretty much so winged it. anyway, thanks for the reply Spontaneous Madness. if I come up with anything else, I drop this thread a line.
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Posted on 09-02-09 11:25:22 PM Link | Quote
Please look at the date before posting in a thread. This thread hasn't been active since April.

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