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Cirvante
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Feel the wrath of eternal damnation please! I would appreciate that very much thank you!
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Posted on 07-30-07 01:15:27 AM; last edit by Cirvante on 07-30-07 01:16 AM Link | Quote
I got the inspiration for these sketches after a series of weird dreams I'm trying to piece together since 2006. These characters kept popping up all the time in my head, and so, an artist was born!

Note that the first three have some notes on their backstory.


11/18/06: Melaire Valentine, concept 2: (aka: flat tire )
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b192/Cirvante/Sketches/Melaire-wip2.png

My pathetic attempt at a first drawing. She's supposed to be some sort of Firebender (a la Azula from Avatar, minus the blue flames). She first appeared as a fire-juggling dancer whom the heroes (as of yet unnamed and undrawn) were sent to rescue before the enemy finds and kidnaps her for "experimenting."

12/21/06: Reina Valeria Belmonte, concept 1:
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b192/Cirvante/Sketches/Reina-wip1.png

Same, but this time, a pathetic full-body sketch. Hooray for evil proportions! She's rather on the bookish side, somewhat cold attitude (but warms up as time progresses). She's also a doctor; more specifically, a cardiologist, and has potent healing abilities.

1/19/07: Suzanne von Meister, base:
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b192/Cirvante/Sketches/vonMeister-1.png
*Pending redesign, the uniform stays, though.

Better, but lol unintended Napoleon complex The evil big boss of the story. She's an excellent swordmaster, and anyone who sees her draw her twin beam sabres will not live to tell about it.

3/08/07: Melaire Valentine, second revision:
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b192/Cirvante/Sketches/Melaire-rev2.png
*Pending revision/dancer outfit

Now we're getting somewhere.

And the latest:

7/05/07: Reina Valeria Belmonte, third revision:
*Pending formal outfit



I has improved (though I still suck at hands and action-y poses lol)

Comments and criticism appreciated.

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Dan Hibiki
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Talks mostly in pictures.

"I dislike the art of fighting, but I want to be the king of fighters!"
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Posted on 08-02-07 05:03:40 AM Link | Quote
Sorry, Cirvante. I'd love to comment, but on behalf of the people here in the art forum, I regretfully inform you that, because you're not showcasing layouts, pixel art, or video game fanart, I cannot recognize or give advice on one piece of work here.
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Posted on 08-02-07 05:44:26 AM Link | Quote
Do I sense a tone of bitter disapointment in your voice, Clockworkz?

Must be my imagination.

Your art has potential, but from squiggly lines, to mishapen figures, I can't call it good.

You have potential, but you need to grasp it.

Lord, not saying that my stuff is very good though...

Keep at it, and keep trying. You're drawing anime, so look toward copying facial structure and poses from scenes from Anime/Manga with your character's features, until they look better.

No offense intended. If I offended you, it's because you're touchy.

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Posted on 08-02-07 08:31:35 AM; last edit by Xkeeper on 08-02-07 03:20 PM Link | Quote
Daily Cycle II ~ 1777
Originally posted by Clockworkz
Sorry, Cirvante. I'd love to comment, but on behalf of the people here in the art forum, I regretfully inform you that, because you're not showcasing layouts, pixel art, or video game fanart, I cannot recognize or give advice on one piece of work here.

Just because you never get feedback doesn't mean you should be a dick to others

Hell, I was even the one who said the "flat tire" comment

But yeah, squiggly lines and somewhat misshapen things... things that should be smooth are jagged, osme perspectives are goofed, etc.


On that note, ShaddowK's comment is exactly the kind of thing I want to see in this forum.

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