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Posted on 07-29-13 11:12:54 AM (last edited by Hiccup at 08-20-13 11:17:13 AM) Link | Quote
I have made some videos to go in the New Super Mario Bros. and Super Mario Galaxy article.
I will be making videos, until I find any new content to go in articles.

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLKKqYpRH33bL--bEtUKrJDl-tKAffdSK7

And.. the point of this thread?
Do people think they are any good? Should they go in the relevant articles?

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Posted on 07-29-13 12:35:50 PM Link | Quote
Let's see here...

#1: Looks good, but shouldn't the video be titled "(W6 to W8)" instead? It might confuse people otherwise.
#2: The graphics glitch up at 0:32, and the sound dies at 0:44. Otherwise, it would be a good tour of the level.
#3: The beginning and end are pretty weak. It's good that you went straight to it, but getting blindsided by it and taking damage/accidentally killing it makes it look sloppy.
#4: It starts out great, but you could really cut out the entire second half of the video.
#5: Not bad, but you could probably cut out everything past the GAME OVER text.
#6: Finally! A good tour video of that area!


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Posted on 07-29-13 03:42:32 PM (last edited by Hiccup at 07-29-13 07:20:22 PM) Link | Quote
Originally posted by Peardian
Let's see here...

#1: Looks good, but shouldn't the video be titled "(W6 to W8)" instead? It might confuse people otherwise.
#2: The graphics glitch up at 0:32, and the sound dies at 0:44. Otherwise, it would be a good tour of the level.
#3: The beginning and end are pretty weak. It's good that you went straight to it, but getting blindsided by it and taking damage/accidentally killing it makes it look sloppy.
#4: It starts out great, but you could really cut out the entire second half of the video.
#5: Not bad, but you could probably cut out everything past the GAME OVER text.
#6: Finally! A good tour video of that area!


Thanks for the criticism (I'm not being sarcastic saying that)
I have been trying to make these videos high quality and to the point.

#1: I've fixed that.
#2: I've re-done the video.
#3: I've re-done the video.
#4: I've fixed that.
#5: Thanks!


Also, you put "Judging by the terrain and backgrounds, it would have been used in World 6."

There is no need for this as the level has got world 6 in the filename, like all the used W6 levels

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Posted on 07-29-13 06:43:10 PM Link | Quote
That's better.
Originally posted by Hiccup
Also, you put "Judging by the terrain and backgrounds, it would have been used in World 6."

There is no need for this as the level has got world 6 in the filename, like all the used W6 levels

Except that it's not explicitly mentioned anywhere in the article. Not everyone clicks the image to see the file name, and we can't leave it out as "obvious" because it may not be obvious to everyone, especially not people who have never played the game.

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Posted on 07-29-13 07:16:21 PM (last edited by Hiccup at 07-30-13 06:52:23 PM) Link | Quote
Actually now I look it at it another way, it sounds better than "Judging by the filename".

Oh, and I meant the level's filename, not the image.


BTW, are you going to add the other videos?

EDIT:
All the problems you said are now fixed.
And all the videos have annotations.

EDIT2:

I will also do requests. Within reason.

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Posted on 08-16-13 04:59:13 PM Link | Quote
So can I put these in the articles or not?

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Posted on 08-17-13 05:26:52 PM Link | Quote
For the first six, sure. The seventh one is broken, though, so I can't see it.

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Posted on 08-22-13 06:47:33 PM Link | Quote
For some reason the DS videos don't want to fit in the DS sized player (they shrink).

So I will have to link to them, until I find out what how to make the right kind of video (a setting in videodub?).

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