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Halian

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Posted on 09-09-11 11:07:14 PM (last edited by Halian at 07-08-20 07:07:30 AM) Link | Quote
maple post-o-matic 9.3
In the time before time, all of existence consisted of six people: Enāra, the goddess of light; Erina, the goddess of darkness; Kaena, the goddess of the mind; Aume, the goddess of instinct; Vāla, the goddess of fertility; and Sila, the goddess of death. Whilst their power is boundless, their knowledge is not: and so, one day, they conspired to create a being gifted with infinite knowledge. They pooled their unending power together, and so created the queen-goddess Āmāne, and, inadvertently, our universe, with forty thousand or so brothers and sisters.

Not long after Āmāne's birth, though, they saw the strategic value of her omniscience, and so began using it to fight against one another, warping entire universes to their will. Eventually, though, Āmāne forced them to cease their bickering, and the fighting ceased for a short while. Eventually, though, they figured out a way to fool Āmāne: by creating the Treaty-World, a seemingly perfect universe. Many aeons later, though, Āmāne would sense something amiss in the Treaty-World, and empower a small band of its mortal inhabitants to fix it. That is where our story begins.

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Posted on 09-10-11 12:04:59 AM Link | Quote
I don't really know what kind of comments you want on this... but since you asked for them on IRC, I'll try and say some things.

Separating death and darkness is an interesting idea, I think. For some reason I'm imagining a magic system based around specializing in calling upon a specific goddess (consider Ultima VIII), I don't know if that's what you had in mind though.

Is the "Treaty-World" an inhabited realm, or is it more of an "ideal" place where the goddesses have secreted themselves to?

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Halian

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Posted on 09-10-11 12:10:16 AM (last edited by Halian at 07-08-20 07:07:40 AM) Link | Quote
maple post-o-matic 9.3
Dark Is Not Evil perhaps?

Also yes, the Treaty-World is inhabited. Where and what it is, I'll not yet reveal. :3

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Posted on 09-17-11 08:10:09 AM (last edited by Halian at 07-08-20 07:07:42 AM) Link | Quote
maple post-o-matic 9.3
Completely rewrote the intro.

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