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| Jul - Posts by The Red Snifit |
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| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2369/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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Originally posted by BlackRose You wear a disguise To look like Pinkie Pies. But you're not a horse; You're a chicken, Loo. |
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| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2372/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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| For reasons I have already stated, my vote goes to Sanky. CJMiller should be harmless now, and killing him now can only help the Mafia in the long run. He'll be one less person they need to kill, giving them the opportunity to win faster. I understand that we shouldn't leave him alive forever, but there's no rush to kill him now. We should focus on finding the Mafia before we almost certainly reduce our Bystander count by one. |
| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2373/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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![]() On the sierra of my mind, One of Four woke up dead. The Rest of us were not kind. Off rolling went his head. ![]() I once had a son who loved art. He had one eye, no limbs, and no heart. But he was forgotten. He quickly turned rotten, And he tore The Great Seal apart. ![]() The seal of ignorance is gone. My son's attack continues on. Exposed is the precious gem. The death of 7 is caused by him. If there is one thing I realize here, It's that the truth will never be clear. ******* |
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| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2377/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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| Six years ago, I found a place called Acmlm's Board. I registered there and started posting. After all that time, I'm still here. |
| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2378/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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Originally posted by Gabu Either way, people like that are worth neither the time nor the frustration of dealing with. Try not to worry about it. |
| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2379/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2380/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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![]() memories_of_you.txt [L:0000232-0000239] SEEKERS of the tru7h beware! You must become what you hate most and learn to love yourself. You will realize that 7 never really existed. Looking back on your life, you will see the true meaning of tru7h. It will be from a perspective so obvious, you denied its simplicity. Despite this, you knew it all along in the first place. "Knowledge is pain." ******* |
| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2381/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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| Hello, Morsalbus. It's been a while since we last met, last night's TF2 shenanigans aside. Regardless, it's a pleasant surprise to see you here. It's good to have you around, and I hope you enjoy your time here. |
| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2382/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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| To be fair, it seems that the major selling point is not so much the game itself as it is the aesthetic value of the custom made cart, manual, box, etc. that come with it. From the looks of things, they seem pretty high quality, and the one who runs this site apparently makes them all from scratch. The seller puts quite a bit of effort into making these, so I wouldn't just write him off as some common thief or con-artist. With that said, this person really shouldn't be doing this without the explicit permission of the creators of these hacks. The site itself makes no mention of it, so I think it's a safe assumption that this permission wasn't given. This person's work is impressive, so it's a shame that these skills are being abused like this. |
| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2383/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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| Here you go. |
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| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2387/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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| Considering how old you were at the time when you wrote this, this was actually pretty good. Despite the fact that this is not the sort of genre I usually read, I was kept interested throughout the story, and I was disappointed to see it end incomplete. I'm sure your writing has improved since then, but since I don't have any current stories of yours to compare it to, I have to respond to this alone. I suspect you won't need much of this advice, but I'll give it just in case. First of all, when writing large blocks of text on the Internet, it's best to separate out your paragraphs using empty lines, such as what I'm doing with this post. It makes the text look far less intimidating to read, and space is not much of an issue when you don't have to deal with paper. You might want to even put multiple blank lines in between the major sections of your writings, but if you get too carried away, it'll come off as informal. Now, you can get away with a lot of informality in this since it's in first person perspective with somebody who's naturally informal, but having phrases like "WTF face" and "oh my gawd" in your narrative is really pushing it. It could work in some contexts, but I would avoid having your characters actually narrate lines like this. Finally, I'm not sure if you had any plans for him later, but the character of Aaron seemed to have been set up as a major character in the beginning and was pretty much tossed aside soon after. In the part at Mac's, Aaron's involvement becomes increasingly limited as the scene goes on, and after the fact, he isn't mentioned again. Perhaps this is just an unintended side-effect of the story remaining unfinished, but he really did seem to be mostly ignored during and after that scene. Anyway, there are a few more nits to pick, but I don't think I really need to go over them. With all this said, I really did enjoy your story, and you avoided most of the usual mistakes such young writers typically make. I look forward to seeing more of your writings in the future. |
| The Red Snifit Seeker of the tru7h Level: 90 ![]() Posts: 2388/2644 EXP: 6973998 For next: 214611 Since: 08-02-07 From: Subcon Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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Originally posted by Peardian Probably the same way you pay for gasoline even though it's often priced to nine-tenths of a cent. Namely, you just round the prices. |
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