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PivotQJ Random nobody Level: 7     Posts: 4/6 EXP: 1058 For next: 390 Since: 02-21-08 Since last post: 14.2 years Last activity: 14.2 years
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Smallhacker Member Level: 26  Posts: 87/123 EXP: 100409 For next: 1866 Since: 07-04-07 From: Stockholm, Sweden Since last post: 9.3 years Last activity: 9.3 years
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| Wow... just... ... ...wow.
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Originally posted by PivotQJSmallhacker basically said "Your stuff sucks." Only in a roundabout way. Edit: I myself am not commenting on it because I didn't watch the videos. ____________________ =================== [Posted by NightKev] |
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Sails 2800    as a video game grows old its content and internal logic deteriorateÿ Level: 102  Posts: 881/2803 EXP: 10923577 For next: 166390 Since: 07-04-07 Pronouns: He/Him From: MA Since last post: 121 days Last activity: 29 days
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| Certainly loving the constructive criticism guys.
It's certainly a start, and hell it's better then I could do. The concepts are random and are not as entertaining as you were most likely aiming for, but hey, so long as you are having fun yourself, that is what counts. But in all seriousness, it's not very good. The animation is choppy, as said before the concepts don't make much sense, and they are overall just quickly made and don't have much effort put in to them. Instead of doing something random with crazy things happening all at once, try to make an actual plot. Don't take this too personally of course, if you enjoy doing it, continue and you will eventually come up with better ideas and become better at using Pivot overall. Of course, this is assuming you are looking for criticism. If you are just showing that you have been toying around and just doing mindless junk in Pivot, then I suppose that this post is rather worthless to begin with. It does boil down to this though. It's pretty damn crappy, and you really need to work on it. ____________________  |
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Sails 2800 as a video game grows old its content and internal logic deteriorateÿ Level: 102 Posts: 883/2803 EXP: 10923577 For next: 166390 Since: 07-04-07 Pronouns: He/Him From: MA Since last post: 121 days Last activity: 29 days
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Originally posted by HiryuuOriginally posted by Sonicandtails I gave my reasoning and real criticism beforehand, then my shortened conclusion, please try harder next time  (In other words, didn't you take English? You have to have a wrapped up rewording of your point in the conclusion!)
Also, PivotQJ, there is a difference between your videos and SFOC. SFOC is funny and even if it doesn't look like it, it has thought put in to it to make it funny. Try something that hasn't been done, trying to make something that has already been done is kind of lame. ____________________ |
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Dan Hibiki 1190  Talks mostly in pictures. "I dislike the art of fighting, but I want to be the king of fighters!" Level: 71  Posts: 303/1191 EXP: 3020499 For next: 146615 Since: 07-22-07 Since last post: 11.8 years Last activity: 3.0 years
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Originally posted by HiryuuHiryuu, you're nit-picking and reading what you want to read. S&T gave his constructive criticism, and gave reasons why it was crappy. And I am in complete agreement with him, as well. I'd give my crits, but actually, S&T beat me to everything I could say, honestly.Originally posted by Sonicandtails ____________________ 
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Originally posted by BoingPlease tell me you're joking.Originally posted by PivotQJ ____________________ =================== [Posted by NightKev] |
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Xkeeper Level: 263  Posts: 4776/25353 EXP: 297174389 For next: 1786064 Since: 07-03-07 Pronouns: they/them/???????? Since last post: 4 days Last activity: 30 min.
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S.N.N. 750 Level: 58  Posts: 249/755 EXP: 1524606 For next: 52940 Since: 07-21-07 From: Ontario, Canada Since last post: 8.4 years Last activity: 5.6 years
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Oh my god, Kattwah's layout works!
-------------------------------- Some random guy from board2, which apparently appeared in this topic for no relevant reason. Anyway, haven't really done any work with Pivot myself. As others have said, it's not very good. Most of it just seems clunky and not well put together. However, as S&T said, it's a start, but it needs quite a bit of polishing. ____________________ |
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(you dont have to post download links, just pictures if you dont want to just hand them out)
And it has a plot. but when people make sick figures on crack videos its suppose to be random, not like, "oh hey, were just standing here doing nothing" Its