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 Let's see here...
#1: Looks good, but shouldn't the video be titled "(W6 to W8)" instead? It might confuse people otherwise.
#2: The graphics glitch up at 0:32, and the sound dies at 0:44. Otherwise, it would be a good tour of the level.
#3: The beginning and end are pretty weak. It's good that you went straight to it, but getting blindsided by it and taking damage/accidentally killing it makes it look sloppy.
#4: It starts out great, but you could really cut out the entire second half of the video.
#5: Not bad, but you could probably cut out everything past the GAME OVER text.
#6: Finally! A good tour video of that area! 
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| Posted on 07-29-13 03:42:32 PM (last edited by Hiccup at 07-29-13 07:20:22 PM) |
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Originally posted by Peardian
Let's see here...
#1: Looks good, but shouldn't the video be titled "(W6 to W8)" instead? It might confuse people otherwise.
#2: The graphics glitch up at 0:32, and the sound dies at 0:44. Otherwise, it would be a good tour of the level.
#3: The beginning and end are pretty weak. It's good that you went straight to it, but getting blindsided by it and taking damage/accidentally killing it makes it look sloppy.
#4: It starts out great, but you could really cut out the entire second half of the video.
#5: Not bad, but you could probably cut out everything past the GAME OVER text.
#6: Finally! A good tour video of that area!
Thanks for the criticism (I'm not being sarcastic saying that)
I have been trying to make these videos high quality and to the point.
#1: I've fixed that.
#2: I've re-done the video.
#3: I've re-done the video.
#4: I've fixed that.
#5: Thanks!
Also, you put "Judging by the terrain and backgrounds, it would have been used in World 6."
There is no need for this as the level has got world 6 in the filename, like all the used W6 levels
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That's better.
Originally posted by Hiccup
Also, you put "Judging by the terrain and backgrounds, it would have been used in World 6."
There is no need for this as the level has got world 6 in the filename, like all the used W6 levels
Except that it's not explicitly mentioned anywhere in the article. Not everyone clicks the image to see the file name, and we can't leave it out as "obvious" because it may not be obvious to everyone, especially not people who have never played the game.
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| Posted on 07-29-13 07:16:21 PM (last edited by Hiccup at 07-30-13 06:52:23 PM) |
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Actually now I look it at it another way, it sounds better than "Judging by the filename".
Oh, and I meant the level's filename, not the image.
BTW, are you going to add the other videos?
EDIT:
All the problems you said are now fixed.
And all the videos have annotations.
EDIT2:
I will also do requests. Within reason.
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So can I put these in the articles or not?
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For the first six, sure. The seventh one is broken, though, so I can't see it.
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For some reason the DS videos don't want to fit in the DS sized player (they shrink).
So I will have to link to them, until I find out what how to make the right kind of video (a setting in videodub?).
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