Jul -- Craziness Domain: CINQUAIN SHOWDOWN

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Posted on 12-27-11 01:28:31 AM

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Reverse cinquain

Norton.
Poorly done anti-virus thing
Many annoyances
and much horror...
Painful.

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Posted on 12-28-11 06:06:44 AM

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Jonesing
To challenge all
the members to a dumb
sestina fight because I am
psycho.

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Posted on 12-28-11 07:19:00 AM (last edited by Shy Mikan at 12-28-11 04:19 AM)

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Um...poe7ry
is not br´keん
it can never be >BR<
because no ~~FUN allowed~~ does not matter, do you?
you don't...
hahahaはhahahaha
your poetry has prepared
that will not do
go Away.

Took some liberties. And with that I mean smashed the thing with an sledgehammer.
It is a broken butterfly, after all.

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Posted on 12-28-11 04:40:22 PM

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Originally posted by Shy Mikan
poe7ry
is not br´keん
it can never be >BR<
because no ~~FUN allowed~~ does not matter, do you?
you don't...
hahahaはhahahaha
your poetry has prepared
that will not do
go Away.

Took some liberties. And with that I mean smashed the thing with an sledgehammer.
It is a broken butterfly, after all.

Good. Smashing cinquains with a sledgehammer is a good thing to do. I hate them so fucking much, hence my making a thread mocking them.

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Posted on 12-28-11 04:56:49 PM (last edited by Shy Mikan at 12-28-11 05:00 PM)

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Um...

Originally posted by Trap Banana
Good. Smashing cinquains with a sledgehammer is a good thing to do. I hate them so fucking much, hence my making a thread mocking them.

Hatred. Mocking by it. If it has been broken, is it not worthless and trash? Who knows.

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Posted on 12-28-11 08:36:35 PM

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Originally posted by Shy Mikan
Hatred. Mocking by it. If it has been broken, is it not worthless and trash? Who knows.

This world is all about winning and losing. Who is ranked above and below you. The profitable and unprofitable. The accepted and unaccepted. The chosen and unchosen.

But the flame of hope is still burning strong. We will cleanse the world with that flame.

This is our survival strategy!

1995年03月20日

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Posted on 12-28-11 08:40:37 PM

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I try
Is this right all?
I dunno what this is
This line suppose to be like this?
I give.

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Posted on 12-28-11 09:49:58 PM

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Technically, I think the format for a cinquain is this:

Noun.
Two words descriptive of said noun.
Line 1 discussing said noun in some way.
Line 2 discussing said noun in some way.
Another noun that somehow relates to the first noun.

I'm not sure they're even a valid form of poetry, just something that high school English teachers made up to torture their students.

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Posted on 12-28-11 09:59:22 PM (last edited by Shy Mikan at 12-28-11 07:09 PM)

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Um...

Originally posted by Joe
This world is all about winning and losing. Who is ranked above and below you. The profitable and unprofitable. The accepted and unaccepted. The chosen and unchosen.

But the flame of hope is still burning strong. We will cleanse the world with that flame.

This is our survival strategy!

1995年03月20日

... That wasn't a cinquain.

Butterflies can't survive in fire anyway, so it doesn't matter.

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Posted on 12-28-11 11:06:31 PM

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運命の至る場所
Unmei no itaru Basho

This spell.
It will change fate.
Everyone will be saved.
You will be banished from this world.
"Let's share—"

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Posted on 01-21-12 02:52:17 AM

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On Jul,
Everybody
Posts here in Craziness
Domain. You have to or no one
knows you.

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Posted on 01-24-12 02:58:25 PM

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Profile
PM
Rate
Posts
Threads

check it out      guys

i have become

a

poet allyouhavetodoishaveodd spacing and 

no caps

Hey, if it worked for e.e.cummings...

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Posted on 01-25-12 04:27:31 AM

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Never had to do cinquains in school.

Actually, we never did that much poetry... most of our English classes were devoted to novels. Good stuff too, like One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest.

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Posted on 01-25-12 05:05:38 AM

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Originally posted by Colin
Never had to do cinquains in school.

Actually, we never did that much poetry... most of our English classes were devoted to novels. Good stuff too, like One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest.

Pretty much this to a T. We'd write some poetry if our readings around that time were Shakespeare plays or poems and stuff.

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Posted on 01-25-12 06:01:55 AM

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Um...I honestly didn't even know what a cinquain was until this thread.

Then again, my english classes were about people going to school by bus while I was pretty much self-teaching myself (actually my teacher supported me a lot, giving me exams and stuff), so I kinda skipped over the cinquains part.

Though my actual language classes did feature similar things. I didn't really like those.

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Posted on 01-26-12 02:49:58 AM

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this is
a new cinquain.
this cinquain isn't old.
brand new thing for you to read here.
the end.

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