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Garmichael
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Posted on 06-07-11 05:35:11 PM Link | Quote


[June 7 - June 17] NSMB Level Design Contest


Challenge: Create a Hammer Brother's Desert Level.
Requirements: Uses a desert tileset and there are at least 8 Hammer Brothers found in the level. They can be any type of Hammer Bros (Boomerang, Fireball, etc count), and you don't have to use one of each type.
Deadline: 11:59pm Pacific time zone Friday night (June 17, 2011)

To submit your entry, just post your level file in this thread. Youtube clips are optional, but help with critiques.


Critique Form

Challenge Requirement Met: 10 Points

Design: 20 Points
This is the general quality in design. When critiquing, ask questions like:
Is it fun? Is it well laid out? Does it match the theme of the challenge?

Polish: 20 points
This is the general level of polish. When critiquing, ask questions like:
Are there glitches not caused by emulation? Is there missing trim for the terrain or other tiles? Question mark blocks with powerups inside butted up against the roof? Are there any soft-locks (this is the term for when under certain circumstances, the player can't finish the level unless they die and start over).


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Posted on 06-07-11 05:47:42 PM Link | Quote
What do you mean by: "You dont have to use one of each type"?

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Garmichael
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Posted on 06-07-11 05:56:42 PM Link | Quote

I mean that there are four types of hammer brothers and you don't have to use all of the types. You just need 8 total of any types you choose.

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Posted on 06-07-11 07:31:21 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Garmichael
I mean that there are four types of hammer brothers and you don't have to use all of the types. You just need 8 total of any types you choose.

oops sorry, I always mix "don't have" and "must not" up
So I made the mistake Just understood it wrong xD

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Posted on 06-18-11 03:09:54 AM Link | Quote
My level:

Name: Hammer Bros. Desert Hideout

Download (.nml): http://www.mediafire.com/?7rh023vjfusj3q4

Video: No video

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Posted on 06-18-11 04:56:47 AM Link | Quote

Let's go ahead and give this a couple more days to get everyone's submission in


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Posted on 06-19-11 09:06:38 PM Link | Quote

Here's my level!

Right Click and choose Save As: Hammer Brother Oasis.

NSMB_PRO, Ray, and Dir, are you guys submitting for this round?

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Posted on 06-21-11 04:40:22 PM (last edited by Garmichael at 06-21-11 01:43 PM) Link | Quote

Well, it looks like there aren't any more entries for this round, so we can't really pick a winner this time around since only the two of us would be judging. Maybe we can make a poll?

When I get home from work, I will critique your level anyway, grid. Just so you can get some feedback.

I'll edit this post and put your critique in.

I can say this though: this has been your best level so far. There are some polish issues I'll talk about, but I really liked it.




By the way, lots of people have been viewing these contest entries. Who is viewing them? How come more people aren't posting or submitting?

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