Cirvante
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Feel the wrath of eternal damnation please! I would appreciate that very much thank you!
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| Posted on 09-10-07 01:24:53 AM; last edit by Cirvante on 09-10-07 01:28 AM |
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 | For an English project, inspired in part by the people of #super-x:
A poem to this most beautiful rose I will write,
The fairest lady which I have ever laid sight.
To my Juliet, whom I had met
At that party held by Lord Capulet.
When I first saw you, it was love at first sight
But I knew we could not be together without a fight.
Our families, they loathed each other,
To the point their blood has stained many a gutter.
But I had nothing to fear, for love conquers all
Or so I thought, as we were nearing the fall
With a man named Paris you were to marry
The wedding ceremony was not to tarry
My heart, into a million pieces lay broken
How did I not know of this man they had spoken?
No matter, for all hope was not lost
For even I knew that it was not out of love
Your heart was grieving, as did mine
For our families had drawn the line
Your cousin challenged me to a duel
His death and my friend’s were the most cruel.
And then, by order of the Prince I was banished
For killing a man, my reputation tarnished
But what, may I ask, did I have to fear?
While not in body, in spirit you were near.
You came up with a plan so we could be together
But little did we know, it would not be forever
A wrong turn of events and I found you were dead
Why could I not be at your deathbed?
At least we would be joined in death
So I plunged your dagger through my chest
Our parents cried, “What have we done?”
Because of their fighting, their children were gone.
As the lovers lay there, their hands entwined
The bells of the church six times had chimed.
Both Capulet and Montague renounced their battles
The wheels of peace had begun to rattle.
They swore never to fight again in their lives,
Shaking hands, they looked at the sky.
“For there never was a story so full of woe
Than this of Juliet and her Romeo.”
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Simplicity v1.1Honestly, that's a good overview-slash-epilogue. Flow of the poem's not bad at all and it captures what went on in mister Romeo's mind well. If the English teacher's looking for a page-full, I'd be giving it high marks. Not a bad short poem at all.
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