Miasmir Member Level: 50 Posts: 242/528 EXP: 891110 For next: 56207 Since: 07-26-07 From: Lavastone (don't tell the pirate orcs) Since last post: 86 days Last activity: 5 days

Posted on 02-12-10 03:20:40 PM (last edited by Miasmir at 02-12-10 12:23 PM) Link | Quote

I'm pretty biased because this is basically my favorite style of music but I'm enjoying this immensely. This is pretty much the sort of thing I dream of being able to do myself. Good job. (I'd do constructive criticism but ... I'm not done coming down from the trance high yet.) (edit: Well the ending is kind of disappointing, I felt like it was working towards a massive climax but it just faded out. I guess if the drop in emotion was more gradual it would feel less like crushed expectations.)

Bagel Giant Red Paratroopa without music life would Bb Level: 75 Posts: 473/1446 EXP: 3802214 For next: 24690 Since: 03-30-09 Pronouns: he/him From: bear Since last post: 190 days Last activity: 6 days	Posted on 02-13-10 03:51:54 PM Link | Quote
	That's a problem I run into frequently. I hit a wall and have nowhere to go and then get lazy and throw in a fadeout >.< ____________________

Miasmir Member Level: 50 Posts: 247/528 EXP: 891110 For next: 56207 Since: 07-26-07 From: Lavastone (don't tell the pirate orcs) Since last post: 86 days Last activity: 5 days	Posted on 02-14-10 09:00:13 PM Link | Quote
	So I got a chance to put this on my good speakers today, and it really benefits from a subwoofer. You could just have the cymbal around 5:25 be the last sound in the song and not bother fading out; having heard this with appropriately loud sound equipment, I now believe the part before that totally counts as a climax. Eh, just a suggestion.

Bagel Giant Red Paratroopa without music life would Bb Level: 75 Posts: 475/1446 EXP: 3802214 For next: 24690 Since: 03-30-09 Pronouns: he/him From: bear Since last post: 190 days Last activity: 6 days	Posted on 02-14-10 09:14:23 PM (last edited by Bagel at 02-14-10 06:14 PM) Link | Quote
	Was planning on doing one more revision before I declared 744 to be officially done. I'm still not happy with it either. Also finished work on this today. ____________________

Lyskar 12210 -The Chaos within trumps the Chaos without- Level: 192 Posts: 4489/12211 EXP: 99321357 For next: 552214 Since: 07-03-07 From: 52-2-88-7 Since last post: 7.4 years Last activity: 7.3 years

Posted on 02-25-10 01:18:24 AM Link | Quote

Stats Time/Date 02-24-10 07:18:24 PM Posts 4489 Days Here 967 Level 98 Metal_Man88's Post Pretty nice; a lot better than I can do, though I can only barely get a song out. Yeah, it's hard trying to finish a song; there's this first half which is nice, then motivation starts to drain as it goes on. Not to mention being annoyed whether each portion is 'good enough' or not. ____________________ Don't let an old saying get in the way of a good idea. Eisnaught - SSQ² - Mobius Roleplay - SSS