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Posted on 07-23-09 02:56:50 AM Link | Quote


Current progress
- Got the torso, and the rough feet done.
- Head shape done.

Needs work
- I don't like how I did the hips.

Next up
- Breasts.
- Arms (can't think of a position)


More will come as I complete the image~

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Posted on 07-23-09 03:05:44 AM Link | Quote
What hips? No, really, I can see where you tried to do the hips, but I think it needs a little bit more.

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Posted on 07-23-09 03:06:17 AM Link | Quote
Thin arms and legs too. Hourglass figure! Remember it well!

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Posted on 07-23-09 03:26:28 AM Link | Quote


Done
- Breasts
- An attempt at toes (hate drawing those things)
- Hands + arms.
- Beefed up legs a little.
- Attempted to fix hips

Needs work
- Hiiiiiips....
- Breast shape
- Possibly the loose arm

Next up
- Actual clothes.
- Cleavage
- Possibly hair?

~50% now, still gonna work at those hips.

Clearly this person is not amused.

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Posted on 07-23-09 03:29:42 AM Link | Quote
Don't be afraid to exaggerate your work. It has cartoon proportions, go big, go bold, go B-cup. Find that focal point and bring it to focus.

A small note on the side however: Use a mirror when you draw, otherwise you will get a bad skewing habit that will be hard to break. I speak from experience there. :/

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Posted on 07-23-09 03:31:27 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Darkdata

A small note on the side however: Use a mirror when you draw, otherwise you will get a bad skewing habit that will be hard to break. I speak from experience there. :/

I've noticed that already in my drawings, they're usually crooked, so I tend to draw 3/4 perspective.

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Posted on 07-23-09 03:42:28 AM Link | Quote


Done
- Look for yourself

Needs fixing
- The usual

Next time
- FACE



So, do I go bigger?

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Posted on 07-23-09 03:55:55 AM Link | Quote
I think she could stand one more size. Also, I'm really interested in what you plan to do in terms of a face expression

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Posted on 07-23-09 03:56:21 AM Link | Quote
With her hair she is only three heads high, although in some cartoony cases this is a good thing. In this case however I think it makes her head a little too big. :/

It might just be me though.

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Posted on 07-23-09 06:19:43 AM Link | Quote
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Posted on 07-23-09 06:27:00 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Darkdata
With her hair she is only three heads high, although in some cartoony cases this is a good thing. In this case however I think it makes her head a little too big. :/

It might just be me though.


I see it too. It looks like the head is too big for that body. Either make the head smaller, or the body bigger.

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Posted on 07-23-09 02:10:42 PM Link | Quote
I did shrink the head quite a bit, but I'm still not happy with it.

I may redraw the whole thing and then scan that.

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