Hiryuu Level: 207 Posts: 11550/14435 EXP: 127620020 For next: 2164134 Since: 07-06-07 Since last post: 11.8 years Last activity: 11.7 years

Posted on 07-08-09 10:26:12 PM (last edited by Yume Kusanagi at 07-08-09 07:26 PM) Link | Quote

Yea, no one posted about this one... I can see what this one's about easily, though it seems to dodge every which way just a tad. Though, if it's for effect given the gravity that's trying to be conveyed and the utter confusion that has one looking every which way while, on the outside, maintaining utter composure...I can kinda see where you would use something like that. It's good...a bit wordy for what you're intending in some areas...but good. ____________________

Ctenophorae Level: 85 Posts: 43/1921 EXP: 5772359 For next: 126181 Since: 06-19-09 From: Oregon Since last post: 8.1 years Last activity: 27 days	Posted on 07-12-09 10:31:20 PM Link | Quote
	I'm glad there's somebody out there who actually understands it! ____________________

Mini-Moog Level: 29 Posts: 17/159 EXP: 135772 For next: 12113 Since: 10-12-09 Since last post: 12.3 years Last activity: 11.9 years	Posted on 10-12-09 07:18:57 AM (last edited by Mini-Moog at 10-12-09 04:20 AM) Link | Quote
	Quite nice, really. Good vocabulary. (edit) Damn. D'n00b'y135 tricked me into thinking this thread was slightly newish. Oh well.

Ctenophorae Level: 85 Posts: 593/1921 EXP: 5772359 For next: 126181 Since: 06-19-09 From: Oregon Since last post: 8.1 years Last activity: 27 days	Posted on 10-12-09 10:37:10 AM Link | Quote
	Weird, this one was stuck in my head earlier today for some reason, then I come here to see it bumped! ____________________ ゆっくりしていってね!!!